This game is terrible, there are way too many grammar mistakes, there is almost no content and the way he has it right now with the level based format it makes it so none of the choices you made are saved.

This can be a good project if supported with some graphics and animations.that also remind me "framed" app,check it to get some idea.

This is a cool game!

Thanks for fixing game crash bug. Now my opinion. First, technical problems. In many instant death choices there is no ability to return to the homepage, so I had to leave the game and play it again. So, suggestion 1 is to add homepages everywhere where it is possible. I don't understand why you have decided to make basement separately from the chapter 2. Also, if you enter a basement and you don't have a flashlight, you can't return to the homepage and you have to leave the game and play it again. So, suggestion 2: Make entering the basement chapter a continue of a chapter 2 of level 1. First when I read page when I was going to the basement, I thought it was game over. But then I, luckily, remembered that the basement was in level 1 menu. And the final technical suggestion. This game needs more atmosphere, so you defietely should add sounds and musics. You can add music by downloading it on PC and adding to your Dropbox account, then link Dropbox profile in hyperPad app. You can also add UI sounds which you can download from hyperPad asset shop. You can activate them when you click stuff. Now my suggestions about the plot. I now it is your game and you decide it's story, but I think you should make it more realistic. For example, you should add a motive, why a bunch of crazy guys with shotguns, axes, spears, pistols are always hunting us. Because it is strange, this guys escapes the prison, and suddenly goes to kill us. Why us? So, the first suggestion about the story is: more detailed story with pretty rational twists. Also, you should make a bit more predictable what do choices lead to. For example, when you need to choose 1 of 2 doors in the basement, you have no idea which one leads to instant death, and which one to the ending. You shouldn't make choices like that. So, the second suggestion is: less random instant death choices, more roots that lead to different endings (and by endings I mean final endings, not insta-deaths). This is a quest text, so we can't fully see the picture. It's like a game book. You should think a bit more about environment details, what stuff is happening, what time is it, where we are. You need to write more info about people, about different places. For example, you can write how does killer look like: 'He is a tall, strong, bearded man, and in his eyes you can see nothing else but total insanity'. So, the third suggestion about plot is: more details about people, items, events, environment. It is pretty short, but you can improve it to a big awesome quest with cool plot twists and different endings, it's in your hands. So think about the atmosphere, the plot, and the characters. I wish you to make very cool text quest, good luck :-)

I tried playing it 4 times and it always crashes. Why exactly?

It just crashes.. I can't play it.